Judge: Lucy Peterson (Bard High School Early College)
Resolution: This house believes that prisons should be abolished
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Posted at April 22, 2015 12:31:50AM EST by Jacqueline Haugen
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"Types of Prisons." Crime Museum. National Museum of Crime and Punishment, 1 Jan. 2015. Web. 22 Apr. 2015. <http://www.crimemuseum.org/crime-library/types-of-prisons>.
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Posted at April 22, 2015 08:14:40PM EST by Bobby Good
5. Jedediah Royal, Director of Cooperative Threat Reduction at the U.S. Department of Defense, 2010, Economic Integration, Economic Signaling and the Problem of Economic Crises, in Economics of War and Peace: Economic, Legal and Political Perspectives, ed. Goldsmith and Brauer, p. 213-214
Posted at April 23, 2015 11:57:12PM EST by Jacqueline Haugen
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Posted at April 25, 2015 01:43:17AM EST by Bobby Good
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Submitted at April 26, 2015 06:27:03PM EST by Lucy Peterson
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|Responsiveness to opponent:||2||1|
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Good work. I liked how you stuck to your guns and that you didn't take on a larger debate even when your opponent enticed you to. Do work on your delivery because it was very challenging to make sense of your arguments when you were speaking so quickly. While I thought some of your arguments were a stretch, your point about recidivism was well supported and you were right to say that your opponent never showed how her solutions would bring about different results.
Good job making arguments. You had a strong case by laying out the alternatives and only keeping high security prisons. I was very disappointed that you were so disrespectful to your opponent, and it lost you the match. It is always better to maintain decorum in a debate instead of calling your opponent "absurd." Furthermore, slow down when you speak. There is no reason to rush through argument and have them lost on the judge. At times it was difficult to understand you.
The decision is for the Proposition: Bobby Good
Reason for Decision:
The decision is in favor of the proposition. While both sides made good arguments, ultimately the claim that recidivism is a problem that plagues the prison system from the inside out was never successfully overturned, despite the many alternatives provided by the opposition. Even in absence of a realistic alternative, the point that prisons are useless because they fail to accomplish the reforms they are expected to carry out was not refuted with evidence from the opposition, and that argument was the strongest one brought forward. The opposition failed to successfully prove why maximum security prisons were different than the prisons that she did categorize as able to be abolished. Furthermore, the way that the Opposition presented her case was rather disrespectful, and her arguments lost some credibility because of that. Both sides should work on delivery, clarity, and doing good research such that you can respond to one another with more specifics and fewer generalities.