Aloha from Hawai'i Eriko!! Even though your debate was ruled as a victory for you since your opponent failed to respond, I thought I would send a quick note thanking you for entering and giving you some feedback in the event you advance to Round 2. Your two main points provide a good set-up, but I'm not sure I heard a clear evidence under the quality of life point that would have withstood significant challenge. You might want to bulk up your evidence there or be prepared with extra information, just in case. In the rebuttal, the answers to the reform point were very good. The systemic argument was also good and could possibly be developed more, either through evidence or analysis.
I hope you find the rest of the competition fun and exciting. Best of luck!!